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Workshop 1 draft

The author appealed to his audience by using a combination of ethos, pathos, and logos. The author uses credible sources as evidence to show that college is becoming more and more expensive. He helps the audience picture what the world would be like if we learned from hands-on experience forcing us to think for ourselves rather than to repeat our teachers. He also deduces that those who actually crave knowledge would be able to do more learning in the real world rather than in a classroom setting wasting time.

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